■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you think schools should make their students wear school uniforms? | |
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I disagree that school should make their students wear school uniforms because three reasons. First, today, it is important to respect private features and next, because of purity, freshness and sanitation. At last some bad situations for students as being a student. I'll wirte about those three reasons specifically.
First of all, as I mentioned, it's important to respect private features. And like crasing that general rule, school uniforms don't seem to respect students' features. And following my thought, almost 100 percent of students don't like wearing school uniforms due to school uniforms are not clothes which express thier features. I think school uniforms are just saying that we're the same.
In addition, we must wear school uniforms if we go to schools which require to be wore them. That means we might wear the same clothes for a week unless we buy many pairs of them. This point doesn't seem to be good for puity, freshness and especially public sanitaion. Numberous kinds of virus will be attached to uniforms and it will infect students, and this infection will be critical for people who have breathing problems.
At last, students get many bad panalty just being students. For instance, in Korea, many taxi drivers don't stop to take students because usually students don't go so far that they can't get much money from a student. And that situation will make students being late for school feel bad and tight. In addtion, students will be tricked by tricksters because students don't know about many things. And these situation won't happen because since students are in middle school, they look adults.
In conclusion, I think schools shouldn't make their students wear school uniforms according to those three reasons. Only not wearing school uniforms, we can stop many problems. Hoping schools stop do that, I'll finish my essay here. | |
이번에 쳤던 ib-set란 시험에서 나온 주제입니다. 처음이고 공부를 하나도 안하고 쓰는터라 많이 부족하겠지만, 평가 부탁드립니다. 그리고 보완해야할 점도(사실 이게 제일 많겠지만.'.) 사전으로 단어는 한 단어 찾았어요, sanitation.
25분 걸렸고 단어수는 306자네요. 그리고 이정도면 점수는 얼마나 나올까요?