agree or disagree? the extended family is less important now than it was past |
there is an argument about whether our society is more need the expended family than the small family .although some people say that the small family is more comfortable to lives, i strongly believe that the extend family is still crucial. that is because children can learn how to respect the old people and extended family maybe answer about social problem. i briefly describe some reasons further in my essay.
first of all, i agree with the fact that it is more increasing the imprtance of extended family because the young people can learn social skills and basic rules from granparents so they can have a sense of esteem . in my experience, when i was in an early age, i had lived with my grandparents until they died. my parents had workplace so grandparents always took care of me. also my granfather was a teacher so he taught me about korea history and i can learn a lot from him he always told me that men should be tolerate and fair. and i still remember his lesson as yesterday
secondly, extended families suggest the answer of social problems such as the old age, delinquency of teenagers.today, the form of families is changed from a big familly to a small family. then, there are a lot of problems to be not cared people who are elderly and teenagers. according to the a certain survey, the rate of sucide is h igh among the old people because they feel that their family treat the old people as burdon. however, if people live together with relatives, the problems of the age of society can diminish . also the government no longer raise taxes about an institution of the old people
to sum up, though some people think that individual society requires only a small families because it is easier to move from one place to another, i storongly believe that the extended family is more important |