Do you agree of disagree.
it is more important to use land for human than saving endangered animals. |
Nowadays, we’re living in a well designed society. People always get what they want at hand and do what they want. As increasing these demands or needs, people have looked for more convenient way and more land to accomplish their desire. As a result, now we’re hardly seeking for natural ecosystem and many species are dying for these human selfish acting. Therefore now we should control our exploitation
As mentioned above, land should be no more used for human needs. First, saving perished living is more important than human desire. there are already many farm, house, industry spot for human while, what can we find for these endangered animals? There is just defined land for them like national park or greenbelt. And as even these natural areas diminished, unique animals die radically. For example, as foreshores have innovated to farmland, the residents have many economical benefits, but the ecosystem surround these areas spoiled radically and the original natural habitats have died and there also contain a lot of endangered animals. So, among the environmentalists affirm that preserve the foreshores to natural state and they also persist that if we conserve it we can earn more many things.
For these reasons, using land for exterminating animals is the better choice than using for us .From small beginnings come great things. Though it seems that we undergo inconvenience, if we preserve our valuable nature then later we will gain more significant value. |
위 주제로 한건대요 ㅜㅜ 글자수가 300자라고 하는데 ms에서 글자수 해보니까 1000자 넘고 단어는 250개던데 300이란게 단어갯수를 말하는건가요?
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