Machines vs hands - which are better at working?? |
What does ‘working by hand’ remind people of? In such a filled-with-machines modern world, working with hands is sometimes associated with diligent, beautiful images like ‘authentic craftsmanship’. Acknowledging all those positive images they provoke, however, I still firmly believe that producing things by machines is better than hands. The reasons are that they ensure much faster, more accurate working and also can be used to deal with difficult, hazardous working procedures. To begin with, machines can basically handle works with higher accuracy and velocity. They are originally planned to be built with objective scientific principles and calculation in the first place. Because of this, once perfectly produced, machines almost do not allow any mistakes or crucial matters during operation. This accuracy, combined with fast speed gained from modern technologies and materials, makes most of the given works be done with the extreme ease in a short period. Just observing small calculators could exemplify this point – their calculation speed could be million times faster than that of human, and at the same time they do not make one errors at all. Furthermore, machines are much more proper at touching big, dangerous works. Due to increased scale and range of industries available in these days, there are many industrial works which exceed the ability of human’s body. In this case, machines could effectively replace human and help people get desired results. Think about the process of producing airplanes in a large factory – the whole scope of making procedure is beyond human. Without necessary machines, people might not be able to produce just one airplane in a year. Numerous kinds of tools are used in each part of an airplane, realizing what would be impossible without them. To summarize, using machines are more recommended compare to hands, since they guarantee much higher speed and degree of accuracy, also enabling risky works to be done. Many people are afraid of the possible accidents they might bring about from time to time, but at least when it comes to efficiency, they are incomparable to human.
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