Q. Do you agree that the ability to cooperate is more important today than in the past. |
Nowadays, many people prefer to spend time alone because of the spread of individualization. Some people think that cooperation was only necessary in the past. However, I am convinced that it becomes more dispensable for people to get the capacity to cooperate these days for the following reasons.
First of all, it is really helpful to work together in order to work more productively in global society. With the advent of internet technology, a lot of people can acquire information easily. However, it could not always bring convenience to them. Because of oversupply a wide range of knowledge, people have to pick up what they need among numerous research or news. Hence, cooperating would make it easier to find and gather information they really want to get. As an example, some studies show that oversupply of information makes people have difficulty gaining them and feel stress. In addition, increasing many problems that should be solved by everybody's efforts would enable the ability to cooperate is more necessary today. There are serious problems, especially concerning natural environment caused by human activities. In the past, it was possible to solve the problems through efforts of governments or organizations. However, nowadays, it has became serious and irreparable condition more and more. It could not be solved without all people around the world. For example, air pollution and water pollution have been worsen as time goes on. People have to reduce using fuel and chemical materials in order to prevent them from being exacerbated. It might be difficult to protect our earth by only few people's aid, thus cooperating will be able to solve the problems in the long run. Thus, several bad conditions on the natural environment would stimulate people to work together.
In conclusion, I believe that the capacity of cooperation is more significant today. First, globalization makes it more necessary to work together for more effective achievement. Also, natural environment in danger motivate people to think that collaboration is more crucial these days. |
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