It is better for goverment to spend their funds on the exploration of outer space than on earthly matters. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. |
Since the Apolo touched down on the moon in the last 20th centuries, human beings have been eager to explore space and many counturies competetively pour a plethora of money into space development projects. Many people question whether or not goverment should spend more money on the matters around the globe rather than on outer space. I strongly believe that more funds have to be invested in the problems around the world. This is because it is more important to reserve our enviornment and there are still a lot of problems remaing around us such as poverty.
First of all, preservation of healthy enviorment is a lot more imperative matter for the earth. Because of industrial developments, surroundings are irreparably damaged by human activities. Studies have shown that global warming is the most serious threat for human in the nearer future, which can severly damage all of the enviorment. To be specific, due to increase in average temperature, glaciers can be melted, then the melted water will cover a large portion of land in the earth. Eventually, it will bring a wide variety of unexpectable changes in enviornment.
On top of that, human beings still have much more urgent problems throughout the world. That is, many people are dying of food shortage and diseases. However, they are not capable of handling these matters, they are just waiting for aids from wealthier countries. To illustate, when I volunteered in Africa, children were too skinny due to food shortage and malnutrition. What I was truly shock about is that all they need to sustain is just 2 dollar a month. After that, I regularly donate my precious pocket money to them through a voluteering organization.
In conclusion, it is clear that funding more money in the earth is more valuable because of urgent enviornmetal matters and people suffering from shortage of staples in Africa. On the whole, I am worried that money in search of outer space is hopelessly being spent now. |
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