Do you agree or disgree with the followiing statement? Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
After graduating from school, people have the work. In this process, many people have a conflict which work they should choose: company offering high salary but stressful, or giving more comfort but low salary in comparison. Most people select the work with high salary. Some people do not pursue and hate this way of choice, but, it is because the formers know the importance of high salary.
First of all, people will need much money as time goes by. If someone have a place in a company, new employees will marry in a few years later. After that, they raise their family composed of spouse, children, in some case, their parents as well as set aside money for their future. It is just necessaries, the least spending. To enjoy life with variety of types of cultural life including movies, hobbies, travel, then, people require much money for it. There is nothing possible without money. Stresses derived from Economic problems are much worse than that from working. To illustrate, my brother was poet and did not earn much money. He have been so stressed, in the end, he stopped to write poetry and found another job. Now he says to me that he know how high salary is important ,compared with anyone.
Moreover, high salary can be a good stimulus in daily life. In condition without change or stimulus, including too stable and comfortable jobs, it can make people feel boring and lose passion for life. But high salary can be good motivation. If the works are not satisfied and so stressed at first. But ,with high salary, proper stress can give people satisfaction in working changing their mind. To get high salary people, people will compete with others and be occupied with their tasks increasing their skills and efficiency, and finally they can arm themselves with high working ability. I do not emphasize "Money is the most important". But it should not be neglected in life. I know that it is best way to last one's interest to their job and successm but it is not so ease. In many cases, one's interest can give not only satisfaction, but also economic problems. And I would like to say that money also can give satisfaction and enjoyable life. |
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