리딩이랑 리스닝 듣고푸는 첫번째 문제로 해커스롸이팅 문제집에 있는 파워테스트 첫번째 문제입니다. 리딩은 재택근무의 이점에 대한것이고, 리스닝은 단점에 대한것입니다. 문제가 없으니 제대로 첨삭해주시기는 힘드시겠지만.. 문법이나 단어, 글의 흐름 같은거라도 조언 받고 싶어 올립니다. 낼모레 시험이라서 급한 마음에 이렇게 올립니다. 부탁드립니다. ^^ |
The lecturer discusses about drawbacks of the work-at-home system which has been evolved rapidly. While the reading passage says that the system is considerably beneficial, she asserts it remains unexpected results. First of all, contrary to the passage’s argument that if employees work at home, they would be more productive and a company will save money because it doesn’t need to have huge spaces for workers, the lecturer states that employees at home will have excessive break times, and thus do their job unprofitably. Therefore, what she asserts is that the company will ultimately lose their money and waste time. Secondly, it is said in the lecture that employees who work at home get depressed because they do not have any human interaction except families while doing their job. The professor believe that the communication between workers encourage them to feel happy and gain desires toward their work. Lastly, the professor also refutes the reading passage’s claim that it is beneficial not to commute. She says that due to staying at home all day, people who work at home are getting unhealthier. |