Do you agree or disagree at the following statement?
- Circumstances are important factor for one's development -
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It has been a controversial issue that circumstances are important factors for one's development. Some people say if one wants to be a successful man, he must be brought up in good and wealthy surroundings. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that circumstances are not always the most important things for one's development. I will explain why it is and use specific reasons to supprt my opinion.
To begin with, although they have not grown in rich and good circumstances, many politicians and other celebrities have optimistic thoughts which had led them to be in these days. For example, the great president in United States, Abraham Lincoln, was born in a small hut but became one of the respectable man in the world. His parents were both illiterate and his mother died when he was young. In spite of his unfortunate circumstances, he worked hard. Finaly, he was elected to Congress. He had done many historical tasks, even though he was poor and being unfortunate circumstances. So to speak, like this example, there are many successful man who had grown up in poor and unfortunate circumstances.
In addition, I think having a strong will is more important than circumstances. According to the above examplification, Abraham Lincoln made an effort to make his dream come true. Despite the poor and unfortunate circumstances, he changed his life by agonizing eagerly. Another example, Ludwig Van Beethoven who was a famous composer in Germany, lost his hearing. But he didn't stop composing despite his circumstances was so harsh, and became a famous composer in the world. Like this examples, whatever circumstances is too harsh and cruel to achieve one's goal, having a strong will can achieve one's goal. Thus, there is no doubt that having a strong will is more important than circumstances.
In conclusion, I have explain why circumstances are not always important factors for one's development with two specific reasons and examples. There are many successful people whose circumstances was not good. And having a strong will is more important than circumstances. So, I strongly believe that circumstances are not always the most important things for one's development. |