It is better for government to spend their funds on the exploration of outer space than on earthly matters. Do you agree or disagree? |
Since human-beings have spent a great deal of money to explore the universe, a controversy has been arisen over whether or not government should their funds on the investigation of the space. I would argue that government should pay attention to the earthly problem rather than the exploration of outer space. The rationale behind this is that we still have lots of earthly matters to solve, such as many dying people because of starvation and the pollution of environment. To begin with, on the earth, there are many people who are dying even today. Although, on the whole, the world has economically developed, some people still have suffered from fatal diseases and starvation. This problem would be solved if they have been able to afford to buy enough food and medicines. That is to say, we still have likelihood to save that people by investing dominations. However, we spend too much money in order to investigation of external space, which is nothing more than fulfilling our curiosity. For example, one research show that if we cut off fifty percentage of our universe exploration budget, we could save over one millions people a year, who died because of lack of food and medical treatment. In addition, due to excessive human activities, the earth, in which we are living now and our descendants are going to live, has been vitally contaminated. To make matters worse, the velocity of environmental pollution is going up day by day. We should be responsible for purifying our environment no matter how much money we have to pay. Unfortunately, most companies, which are criminal of causing contamination, are unwilling to spend money cleaning the environment because it needs so much money that it will worsen their profit. If governments invest their funds on intensifying regulation of environmental concern and increasing the amount of subsidy to care about our earth condition, instead of wasting a lot of money for the space investigation, the degree of pollution will be decreased. In conclusion, in terms of budget that consists of tax from a nation, the government should more focus on our pragmatic matters rather than gratifying scientific curiosity. This is not only because we can save a lot of people who suffered from money problem, but also because we have to save our earth by this invaluable money.
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