학교출석하지 않고 기말 시험이나 숙제로 평가받아도 좋다... 내용을 반박하는 에세이입니다.. |
Although some people think that students are evaluated through their homework and term papers regardless of attendance.However,i strongly believe that it is definitely important for students to attend to the school. There are two reasons:responsiblity and social skills. To begin with, sutends can learn a sense of responsibility by attending at school.As society is getting more complex, social viewpoints about the standard of success had changed. Students had taken good grades of their success in the past. However, they should be responsible for their ativities for their success in the present For example, through diverse social ativities, people play significant roles in morn socity. If they do not have a sense of responsibility, It could be hard for people to succeed at current society because they lose their trust from others. Therefore, by learning a sense of responsibility from school's attendance,students can have bright future. secondly, there is nothing more crusial than students learn social skills by getting around with their peers. some people says that students'success are attributed by good grades related in term papers. it,however, seems to me that advantagesof good grades students gain are eclipsed by those of learning social skills through their friends. when schools evaluate students from their homework students can rubit their homework by coping their friend's homework. This shortcomings hinders developments of their abilitiesonsequently, schools should allow students to hang out with their friends because when it comes to social skills, students can rubmit their homework by copying their friend's homework. This shortcoming hinders development of their abilities. consequently, schools should allow students to hang out with their friends because when it comes to social skills, students can gain more important knowledge by playing with their peers than by doing their assignments. In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that using assignments in order to assess students have more positive effects than attending to a school. This is because as far as students' success is concerned, it is the most significant to have a sense of responsibilty and learn about how to become socialable. 시간이 너무 많이 걸리네요... 보름도 안남았는데..ㅜㅜㅜ |