▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that there are several roles for a
crest of Lambeosaurus. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points
that contradict this argument. (구체적으로 리딩이 crest of lambeosaurus에 대해 어떻게 이야기했으며 이 role들에 대해 lecturer가 어떻게 반대했는지 (예 - 리딩의 주장이 설득력이 없다 / 리딩의 증거들이 부족하다 등) lectuer 내용에서 나온 main contrasting point를 잡아 작성해주세요.
First of all, the lecturer questions the validity
of the point in the reading passage; while the reading passage says ~, the lecturer mentions that the crests may have been an ideal
means to attract potential mates. This is due to the fact that the crests did not help male dinosaurs attract females, but the sound they produced did. They
might have used sound like alligators, making low and growling sound.
Consequently, the reading passage’s first point is contradicted. 리딩과 리스닝의 대조점을 좀 더 앞 부분에서 분명하게 밝혀주세요.
Moreover, the lecturer casts doubt on the
point made in the reading passage that the crests were used as weapons.
Lambeosaurus might not have used its crest to combat because it was too fragile
to attack others. Their crests did not have high density but hollow. In
addition, because the crests were located on their back, they could not serve as protective helmets that helped Lambeosaurus defend its body from predators.
As a result, the reading passage’s second point is refuted.
Last
but not least, the lecturer disagrees with the point made in the reading
passage that the crests were used to supply air while Lambeosaurus kept their heads
under the water. It is obvious that its crests were too small to offer oxygen to the
massive dinosaur. Hence, Lambeosaurus might not have spent a sufficient time on holding its head underwater to eat. By taking less than a few second of breath, it could not breathe deeply. Thus, the reading passage’s final point is
invalid.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR | FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR-LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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