A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Building a factory is a complicated matter because it has both advantages and disadvantages. If a factory is built near a community, the economy of the community may boost in lieu of the additional jobs and more capital in the community. On the other hand, problems such as pollution, increasing population and less space may occur. However, despite the various advantages the factory may bring in, I oppose the factory because there may be other ways to improve the economy of the community, but if the environment is polluted, it would be difficult to restore the nature.
Building a factory could be advantageous to the economy of the community because of the jobs it will create and the capital it would bring in. If a factory is built, it would need workers and a nearby community is the ideal place for recruitment. Jobless people would have more chance to work, which leads to another advantage for the economy. More jobs mean more money to spend and there would be more capital in the community. The economy would grow and the community will also develop and grow.
However, there are not only advantages of building factories but also disadvantages such as pollution, more population and less space. Pollution would be the number one problem of building a factory nearby a community. The factory itself will emit pollution of various types: Smoke, heat, waste water and junk. More traffic and noise will also add to the pollution problem. Increasing population is another problem. More people will come in when the community develops which would result in more pollution. If more people come in, space may also be a problem. There would be less and less space if the population increases, and crowded streets and houses may make the community into an undesirable place to live in.
While there may be various opinions about building a factory, I oppose to the construction because although the advantages cannot be denied, there are other ways to reach to the same effects. Improving the economy is not something that can be done only by building factories. The disadvantages, however, is hard to recover from, especially because nature takes a lot of time and effort to be restored. Moreover, nature is more important than economy since we can survive even through bad economic situations, but never when there are no natural resources.
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