0115 (PR) Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer ―planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
It is true that how to spend the time determines one’s success, so people have found out that they can spend their time more efficiently with schedule(누드명사?). However, some even plan their spare time which is controversial among people. Both planning for free time and not have respective advantages.(자유시간을 계획하는것과 안하는것 둘다 각각의 장점이 있다)
On the one hand, planning the free time is the best way to spend it without wasting it. People can prevent idleness or confusion when they plan. People tend to do what they want, especially during leisure time. Accordingly, they are likely to be lazy because that(it?) doesn’t require any effort. When planning to do something, they can avoid from being loose and save much time. Sometimes people don’t know what to do during the free time. My sister, who is very enthusiastic, always wants to work hard, even on her leisure time. Nevertheless, she often can’t find anything to pour out her energy. If she plans for free time, she could find something.
On the other hand, scheduling free time is not how it should be. Leisure time provides people short rest and freedom. People call it ‘free time’ because they can do something freely. I don’t plan for my spare time in order not to be bound by appointment(어색한지? 누드명사?). Instead I enjoy it with anything pops up in my head. The activities that I feel like to do changes widely. Unless I plan something and repeat it during every spare time, I can have more fun and do a variety of activities. I don’t want to ruin my freedom by restricting it with plan.
All things considered, in spite of a few benefits of planning for spare time, I prefer to let my free time be free because the benefits of planning nothing outweigh those of planning something. Living life with strictly scheduled plan does make a person work hard, but living comfortably is more enjoyable and unlimited(뉘앙스?).