▶ Your Answer :
The universe is
a mysterious and significant space in science study. Some people argue that
governments should spend money on exploring
outer space as much as possible. However, I
strongly disagree with that idea. I believe that governments have to allocate
their finance on basic needs on Earth. There are two reasons why I think like
that and I will explain those reasons in my
essay.
First of all, spending money on fundamental
requirements is more practical than using money on studying
the universe. There are a lot of people who suffer from shortcoming of
basic requirements. Undoubtedly, one of the most main duties of governments is saving and helping those
people by using their budget. In this situation, spending a huge finance on
exploring universe just for observation seems
like a waste of money. Indeed, according to one survey of
1,500 people in 2014, 73% responded that spending money on observing the outer space is not helpful for their
lives or practical. Only 11% mentioned that
exploring the universe is necessary.
Secondly, spending money on exploring the universe
is very costly and low efficient. (low cost-more
efficient than on basic needs.) This is because, studying and exploring outer
space requires a considerable amount of money
and time and its result isn’t always satisfying.
(also the result sometimes not satisfied.) There is one research conducted by
The Financial Organization of Korea in 2016 which well
demonstrates my point. (has supported this maintain well.) According to
this research, Korean government allocated
their budget on exploring outer space twice as much
as the previous year, (almost doubled more than previous year,) however,
the outcome was not as good as (much as)
their expectation.
To sum up, governments should spend their budget on
requirements on Earth for two reasons; practicality and cost-efficient. For
these two reasons, I firmly assert that governments should spend money to meet the basic needs
of (to) people than to explore outer
space.
Writing Score (0-30): 20-21
Score (0-5): 3.00-3.25
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