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Some parents believe that there is no
need for their children to take the classes related to sports. However, in my
opinion, playing sports is truly helpful for students. The rationale behind
this is that it helps them relieve stress and feel a sense of achievement.
First of all, playing sports will help
students deal with their stress well. The important reason is that student can relax
and clear the mind by having enjoyable time and associating with friends. This
enables fresh approach to the perplexing and stressful problems at school.
Therefore, exercise is the easiest and quickest way to escape from the harsh
reality that is full of piles of stressful tasks and relationship problems. For
example, my brother who is in high school once lived a dull monotonous time.
However, after the P.E class was adopted as a required subject, he could spend exciting
time and blow his worries away. This was because he could move his body more
actively at the regular time and could build more strong relationship with his
friends by doing team sports game.
Moreover, exercise enables student to
get the personal satisfaction in life. This is because students can get a sense
of fulfillment when they accomplish goal during playing sports with friends and
their abilities are acknowledged by peers. In other words, student can feel
self-contentment by exercising together and achieving common goals. From own my
experience, when I was in middle school, I had to spend lots of time to prepare
for the athletic meeting with classmates. At that time, I felt a much sense of
achievement than when I just spent time studying. This was because we spent a lot
of time preparing for the meeting together, and we could achieve our goals.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that physical
training classes is necessary for students. The reason is that it will help
them control their stress and they can feel a sense of accomplishment.
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