0144 (PR) Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
One of the essential three for human being(인간의 3요소), residence has been improved linked with developments(복수?) of mechanism and architecture. Some still maintain traditional houses whereas others move to new apartments. In my opinion(이거써도 되나요), residing in modern house is much better in ease of temperature controlling system and adjacent bath room.
First, it has become much easier to cool down or heat up the house than is it before. Many machines such as air conditioners can control the temperature and even moisture in a house quickly with a couple of buttons. Conversely, in the past, people should cut down trees to use it as firewood in order to manage to during winter, or open all the doors and stay in shade for getting along during summer. That must have been difficult and inconvenient. Of course, we don’t have to worry about getting firewood or avoiding hot weather as long as we stay at modern apartments(동의어 수배중).
Secondly, now toilet and bath are closer from us than before. In my country, most traditional houses have their restroom outside of them. Every time I visit my grandmother’s house, a traditional house(동의어 수배중), I don’t use bathroom at night because it is scary to go outside to use it alone. Most Koreans share this feeling when they were(시제가?) young, while using toilet in traditional houses at night. Modern apartments, however, include restroom inside, usually near by bedroom. People have no difficulty to use restroom in those abodes(맞는뜻인지).
To sum up, living in modern house is easier to change(다른단어 추천부탁) temperature by using air conditioner and doesn’t cause any anxiety about using bathroom at night. Although retaining tradition is necessary(쓰지말까요?), like general movements(대세에 맞춰서), I also prefer to live at a modern apartment.
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