저도 부족하지만 제가 아는 한에서 도움드리겠습니다.
heavy influence 보다는 overwhelming, cheif, major, dominant 등이 어울릴 것 같구요 . clerk 보다는 employees, workers가 그 의미를 제대로 전달할 수 있을 것 같습니다.
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│ What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
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│ It is absolutely known to be true that a boss is the most important man in certain group. So boss's qualities have an overwhelming influence on the whole group. In order to be an excellent boss, he needs several qualities: kindness, the ability to distribute the quantity of work to clerk properly, efforts to make good working environments.
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│ Firstly, i believe a good boss must be kind to his clerks. If a boss is rude to his clerks, it makes them feel bad, and cut down enthusiasm for working. When i did arbeit in public office, officer teaches me the way to work so kindly. Thanks to their helps, i can work easier and more efficiently. A boss's kindness are a very good point to the clerk's working circumstance and efficience.
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│ Secondly, one quality of a good boss is the ability to distribute the quantity of works to clerks properly. Lately,in korea, subway workers were on a strike because of complain to their heavy working. They have worked so long in a few workers that not only their health but also working effcience are damaged. A good boss has to give over appropriate work to clerks.
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│ Thirdly, a good boss must have an equality that he make efforts to offer clerks nice working environments. For example, if the office is dirty and diffused, clerks can't be attentive. And, if the office have no air-conditioner in hot summer, i can't put up with the heat like fire and feel like to stop working. In this fashion, a good working condition must be took in consideration by a boss.
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│ In conclusion, from my standpoint, a boss should have these qualities: kindness, the ability to distibute the quantity of works to clerks properly, the endeavers to offer clerks nice working environments.
│ i really hope all the bosses have these qualities, so their group will be more efficient to working, and more friendly.
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