As the number of universities that are intrested
interested in how to attract top students is
increasing every year, it is of great worth to
discuss whether or not they should invest a lot of funds in Social Network
Service. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter for a couple of
reasons.
To begin with, the majority
of students virtually do not have enough time to pay attention to Social
Network Service. They are always busy studying as much as that they feel as if even
twenty four hours are not enough. Therefore, investing a great deal of money in
Social Network Service would not work in attracting top students. For instance,
when I was a student, my friends including and
I were always cramed cramming for
studies, and in order not to not make
students distracted, many schools even prevented students from using mobile
phones. Therefore, neither did we have spare time nor freely use smart
phones or laptops to do Social Networking. Moreover, high schools have
much information about universities that students would apply in and mention about them every Monday. In addition to this, homeroom
teachers regularly counsel students on school
choice privately and provide them with not only new information but also many
documents that they have collected for many years about each college. In short,
spending a lot of funds in Social Network Service is not an intelligent decision.
Another point to rememeber
remember is that, there are many other parts
that universities should put more weigh on. Brand new school facilities like
gym and scholarships might be not only be
main interests among candidates but also significantly influences a
college’s reputation. So, colleges should put
more weight on satisfying their students with good enviroments environments and scholarships rather than on Social
Network Service. Indeed, many television news programs cover related contents
that can support my arguments. In one of the programs that I recenlty recently watched, about sixty percent of the
university students are not satisfied with their school. Though tuition is raising
rising every year, general facilities and scholarships
are not upgraded at all, which refrains them from
recommending their schools. and do not want to recommend their
schools. Therefore, universities should put
more weigh on satisfying their students thorugh through
upgrading facilities and scholarship systems so as to make good reputation.
Then, high school students would be naturally heard hear of it from their teachers. In short, the better
reputation among their students a college has, the more qualified candidates who are good in schools will apply to
it. In order to make a good reputation, universities should
pay attention to make better environments for
their students, and not to spend money on
Social Network Service.
As I have mentioned
above, universities spending money on Social Network Service is neither
effective nor pragmatic in attracting execellent excellent applicants. I certainly disagree with the statement that univeirsities
universities should spend a lot of money on Social Network Service so as to attract many good
students.
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