▶ Your Answer :
According to the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that the reasons why colony collapse disorder occurred over the last several years due to lack of diversity of genes, existence of species of mite and the use of pesticides. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that the number of genetic diversity in these species is plentiful (주어 동사 수 일치) since they already have inhabited a wide variety of parts of the world. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that they are likely to catch a disease due to the shortness of genetic diversity.
Next, the professor insists that bee colony was still observed in 1997. So, it cannot be explained that a specimen of mite called 'Varroa destructor' was caused by the phenomenon. This counters the reading passage's assertion that this mite adheres itself to a bee's body and sucks the bee's material in the body, which can be functioned as its blood. This results in bee's shortening its life.
Finally, the professor argues that the use of pesticides did not contribute to the decrease of quantity of honeybees. The smaller amount of pesticides cannot affect to whole part of the species even if it contains detrimental factors. As a result, he said the reason why lack of species can affect actual starvation. This refutes to the reading passage's suggestion that the bees are passing away since people are using pesticides.
- 조동사 사용, 주어 동사 수 일치 등 문법 실수들이 반복적으로 나타나는 글입니다. - 구체적으로 RC/LC가 어떤 점에서 clash하는지 좀 더 명료하게 작성해주세요.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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LIMITED-FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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