▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that having
astronauts travel to Mars has several problems. On the other hand, the lecture
brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First, the speaker argues that acoustic
system, which is attach to the spaceship and astronauts, could be blown by the dust, and this can be harmful to human health. According to the sound technology, high pitch could solve
this problem so that it cannot have risk to human and equipment. This casts
doubt on the reading passage’s claim that dust could be a serious jeopardy to
the ship and crew.
Second, according to the lecturer,
psychological impact of the long trip could be manageable. The programs of astronauts
are extensive and include all necessity such as dealing with their mind when
crew are put in prolonged separation. Also, computer program could have counseling
programs. This refutes the reading passage’s assertion that astronauts could have
mental health crisis because of lengthy trip to Mars.
The final point made by the lecturer is that
several nations could pour resources together. For example, international space
station is also made by several nations based on international partnership. Nations
which participate to Mars project might have a log of technological advantages
and warrant from it. This counters the reading passage’s argument that the
manned expedition is difficult due to financial burden.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- minor grammar mistake 주의해주세요. - RC/LC가 각각 어느 포인트에서 다른 입장을 보이고 있는지 분량을 조금 더 균등하게 작성해주세요. (Listening이 어떻게 반박하는지가 중요하지 Listening의 입장이 월등히 서술될 경우 reading에서 앞서 언급한 points들이 무시될 수 있습니다) |