(1)People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, most of Korean students are planning to go the college or university after graduate from the high school. Because they think that the degree from university is essence thing for applying job. It can be main reason for Korean students but there can be a lot of reasons for it.
First, you are be able to take a significant amount of knowledge that you want specially. Actually, through the general education in high school we don't have the chance to get professional knowledge and there are a lot of subject that we have to learn basically so we don't afford to take expert information for your future occupation.
Second, you can go through new experience of new community. Being university student will offer to you experience that you never have gone trough. You can meet many different kind of people and learn how to get along with new people.
For example, there are lots of clubs or groups that you are interested in and through that activities you can do many thing that you couldn't do when you were teenager.
We attend college or university for different reason and it can be also other reason - to enjoy their freedom, parents expectation, to go as others etc.
No matter you attend college with any reason, but the point is that studying in university is new and meaningful challenge and you can have a significant chance for your goals. Being college student, you can experience lots of things.
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