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┼ ▨ 에세이 2번째 - 허걱 ┼
│ 저의 2번째 에세이 임다. 이렇게 간단하게 작성하는데 1시간이 훨 넘어 걸렸으니...나 참^^
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│ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
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│ I disagree with that a zoo has no usefuf purpose because a zoo has a lot of useful goals. The zoo not only can serve a big pleasure to a child and helpful spaces, but also can see dircetly the animals which are difficult to see now.
I disagree with the statement that a zoo has no useful purpose because I believe that a zoo provides useful information as well as entertainment. A zoo can not only serve a big pleasure to children and helpful places but also show directly animals which are difficult to see now.
│ First of all, The zoo that has many animals and plants locate far from city, so gave us a helpful space which is similar to nature such as fresh air, a beautiful promonade and cool shade. In addition, children seen a big elephant, lion and monkey take a great enjoyment.
First of all 하면 세개 이상 중에서 첫번째를 의미한다고 합니다. 그냥 First 로..
promonade???
First, a zoo has many animals and plants located far from cities, so it gives us helpful places which are similar to nature: fresh air, beautiful scenery, and cool shade. In addition, children may take a great enjoyment in seeing big elephants, lions, and monkeys.
│ Next, nowdays there are many rare animals because of the environmental pollution and poaching. Those animals live to difficuit if without humans help. So, we have to take care of these animals in the zoo very well. If we didn't look after the animal, we might haven't seen these one like we didn't see a dinosaur more.
Second, a number of animals are on the decrease because of the environmental pollution and unthoughtful poaching; many animals could not survive without people's help. Therefore, we have to take great care of those animals in a zoo. If we didn't look after them, we might not be able to see them anymore.
공룡은 우리가 동물원을 안 만들어서 사라진게 아닌데...
│ In conclusion, A zoo has a great many of useful purposes, so we must develop the zoo facility more modern and the animal to live more comfortable. Therefore, we could avoid seeing amimals only in television.
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In conclusion, a zoo has a great number of useful purposes, so we should modernize zoo facilities and make animals live more comfortably. By doing it, we can avoid seeing animals only in televisions in the near future.
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