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문제는 Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure actvites? Use specific reasons ans examples to explain your choice.입니다 ^^
Whether spending free time outdoors or spending leisure time indoors sometimes become an interesting issue among people. The choice could be made in diverse ways. As for me, I am, of the oppinion that spending free time outdoors is more beneficial.There are two reasons that make my view convincing. This is because outdoors activites is more interesting and healthful than insoors activities.
Above all, I would choose that people do activies outside for activities outside is more exiciting than activities indoors. Generally speaking, outdoors playing have a lot of fun. Outdoor playings such as game, sport and picnic have very intersting things. They are needed many people. Therefore people can feel amusement through getting together. I am a member of climbing set. Every week I go to the mountains with my club members. I feel a lot of enjoyment when I get along with many people and climb mountains.
What's more, outside activities is good for helth. Generally speaking, outside exercises raise one's capacity for locomotion. Outdoor sports such as volley ball, tennis and run are beneficial for health.In every morning my friend do exercise outside. So he is very helth. He says to me " Outside sport is very helful to my helth. I recommend reguraly exercise. outdoods."
As shown above, I prefer to spending my free time outside. T here are two reasons for this: outdoors activities are more interesting and good for health. Priority should be given to outside activities.