■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
|
|
|
▶ Topic :
the role that the crest may have played |
|
|
▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage there is ample support for the author’s claim that Lambeosaurus used its crest for some roles. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that it is doubtful that crests may have been utilized to attract mates. Reptiles typically employ behavior or sound when they attract mates. For example, crocodile lifts its head and makes specific sound to receive attention of mates. Lambeosaurus may have adopted similar method instead of using their crests. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that the crests’ capacity may have been to attract mates and females may have preferred males with large crests. Next, the professor insists that crests are less likely to be used for fights. Fossils shows that the crest was extended backwards. However, if it had used for combat, it should have been enlarged forwards. Moreover, crests was too fragile to play the role of combat. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that crests may have been useful for combat since their capacity as defensive helmets. Finally, the professor argues that the crests were not able to offer air. Lambeosaurus have needed a large amount of oxygen because of its size. However, it was not enough to big so it took a deep breath instead. This refutes the passage’s suggestion that the crest gave Lambeosaurus air when it submerged to eat aquatic plants. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 일단 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 크게 보는 것은 리딩과 리스닝을 얼마나 적절하게 잘 비교행는 가 입니다. 한 문장으로 리딩의 정보를 서술하는 것 보다는 리스닝을 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 서술하는 것이 좋을 거 같습니다. 균형있는 리딩과 리스닝의 비교가 통합형 에세이에서는 가장 중요합니다. 이러한 부분들을 숙지하면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
|
|
지문에 시제가 현재완료로 쓰여서 그대로 쓰긴했는데 시제를 맞게 쓴 건지 모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ 첨삭 감사드립니다!