▶ Your Answer :
Undoubtedly, being honest plays a significant
role in people’s relationships. Some people might think that it is impossible for
people to be always truthful to each other. However, in my perspective, in some
cases, people can always be honest to other people for two reasons, which I will explore
in the following essay.
To begin with, very close relationship usually
requires complete confidentiality among individuals. This requirement encourages
people to be always truthful to each other, leading them to feel a strong sense
of belonging. Building this type of relationship is imperative for people since
they can feel strong bondage to beloved ones, so people tend to create this frank
relationship with close ones. For instance, when my sister was in high school, she
was often distracted thinking that she did not have any^friend to trust. She thought
that her every classmate should spend their whole time to study, only caring to outdo
others and not not to make strong relationship with friends. On the other hand, when she
met her best friend, Kenny, the whole situation was changed. Both she and Kenny
believed that sincere friendship is only built on perfect trust, so they have never
lied to each other, admitting immediately when they said a lie accidently. This method
actually worked well since they did not need to hesitate to express their thought
directly, making them to feel comfortable.
In addition, it is also possible for people
to create trustworthy relationship in workplace. When both supervisor and team member
realize that it is essential to be honest if they want to work efficiently and effectively,
they will never tell a lie. Trusting with each other promotes team members to make
better output and to increase firm’s revenue, eventually leading to thrive this
personal linkage in work place. For example, a research was conducted by Stanford
University to find whether perfect truth is possible in workplace. What researchers
found was intriguing. They found 34% of relationship between a team leader and a
member who do not tell lies to each other, and they finished works 26% more quickly
than those who are not frank to others.
All things considered, it is possible to be
always trustworthy in specific relationship, such as close ones or coworkers. I
am in favor of the opinion that honesty is the value that exists in current society
and plays an actual role in people’s daily lives.
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