Some people think that the condition of the environment will not get better soon. They may think people’s endeavors did not have an impact on the environment. However, in my opinion, the environment’s condition will get better in the coming years. This is because many countries are making laws about the protection of the environment and people’s perspectives are changing.
To begin with, many countries are having laws to protect the environment. Some countries have very strong rules and it helps the to improve environment’s environmental conditions maintain and renew. For example, in Korea, there is a strict law about recycling. It which was made a few years ago. The law is to regulate companies and manufactures. If they do not obey the law, they must have a lot of fines. After making the law, many companies have followed it and the environment my county have been cleaned more and more. (그 법률의 내용이 무엇인지도 설명이 되면 훨씬 좋겠습니다.)
On top of that, people’s views about the environment are changing. In these days, there are many campaigns and movements about the protection of the environment. Then, these help people change their feelings that they think of the environment as a important value which deserved deserves protections. There was a poll conducted by Korea University with college’s students as respondents. The survey’s main purpose was to determine whether people’s perspectives about the environment are had changed. An overwhelming 70% people responded that they more put their values on the environment more than ever. They said since movements made them be able to obtain a lot of information of the environment, their thoughts changed.
To sum up, I believe that the condition will be able to change in the coming years. This is because many countries are making laws to protect the condition and people’s thoughts are changing.
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