Some people believe that not allowing their children to have a smart phone is the right thing to do. However, in my opinion, owning having a smart phone is actually beneficial for young children. I feel this way for two major reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, smart phones can be great learning tools for students and young children. There are many educational applications for smart phones on online. These soft wares softwares are easy to download and to use, and many of them do not cost at all. For example, my younger brother, who is now nine years old, has been using a math app mathematics application which was developed by a high school mathematics teacher. My brother has never been good at mathematics, however, but ever since he started to use the program, he has been demonstrating much better academic achievement. Because of an interesting interface and a few games built in the application, he has finally found himself enjoying mathematic problems questions. If my parents prohibited him to have a smart phone, he would not have made such progress.
On top of that, smart phones help children to keep better friendship. Nowadays, the majority of students, even in elementary schools, have a smart phone and they use them as a major communication tool between friends. For instance, my aunt did not buy a smart phone for her daughter who started to attend a middle school. All of her friends except her had a smart phone, and they used the devices to share information regarding school work such as group presentation, homework, and after-school activities. My niece cousin (aunt의 딸은 사촌이지 조카가 아니죠!!) not only had to ask her friends repeatedly to catch up all the information that she was missing but also had difficulty to make a solid connection with her new friends. Before long, my aunt bought a smart phone for her daughter, so she would not have felt left behind.
To sum up, smart phones can be utilized as excellent learning devices and help children to keep tight relationships among their friends. In this regard, I believe that smart phones should not be forbidden among young children.
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