Some people think that the more number of people who are invited to a party, the better enjoying more enjoyable the party is. However, I have an opposite a different opinion. If we have a party, we need real friends. This is because we can solve some problems usually we usually have, and our party will have good be cost-effectiveness.
First, generally we have some problems, such as regarding our future, love, friendship, and we need some times that to take some advice. However, these days every people are everyone is busy. So just in the party, In a party with less people, we can talk about our trouble to real friends or family and solve it because they know us well are well known about us. For example, our family have a big day which called family's day every year (또는 week, month 등 뭐라도 빈도가 나와야 자연스럽겠습니다.), and in this day we will eat out, and drink some wine and chat our average days occasions. And Last year, my brother was had broken up with her his ex-girlfriend. Because all of us were very busy by working, we didn't did not known about that. After that time, I set up a blind meeting for my brother and now he has girlfriend. If the party was big party like where many people were invited, my brother couldn't would not have been able to talk about that because his personality is timid he must have been too shy. As a result, Instead, my family party solved the problem.
Second, if the party will be is huge, it will be not cost-effective it's cost-effectiveness will not good. Think about many people inviting being invited. There are many kind of preferences, where one person wants to eat meat but another wants pasta, and another wants pizza. However we cannot make them all. On the other hand, if there are only my friends, our preferences is are similar, because we are friends. if it is not, usually they would not be friend. In addition, we can make a party freely, if people are many we have to make just eating party but we can go trip or something else (무슨 의미인지 파악이 어렵습니다.). For example, when I was 20 years old, I went to travel with twenty of my high school friends 20. At first it was funny but we had conflicts of opinions, so some friends had arguments fought. Therefore, Next time, we had a party of just 7 people and that was perfect.
To sum up, we can solve our worry and more efficiency (and로 묶인 두 부분이 서로 대등하지 않습니다). In this regard, I believe that a small scale group party is better than a large one.
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