▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that there are a few
possible explanations for the masonry works in Easter Island. On the other
hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this statement. The speaker argues that Moai was were not a prize for a yearly contest between chiefs. If they were
erected annually, the number of statues must have been 500, considering that it
was fistly were built in 500 years ago. However, roughly 900 statues exist in that area. Thus, the numbers stay same do not add up. This casts doubt on the reading
passage’s
claim that moai would be a reward for competition held annually, with one
statue being each year to honor winners each year. The speaker insists that moai was were not a mediators between people and
divines. This is because some statues look forward, but others look down. (What does it mean?) Moreover, experts could not find any
religious evidence, such as artifacts or remnants of ceremony at mounds. This
counters the reading passage’s assertion that the statues were established to intermediate
between humans and deities. The professor maintains that moai would have not been
constructed to indicate reverence for of their ancestors who came from western
islands. In fact, a few statues face west but others gaze north and east.
Furthermore, the test on DNA reveals that Easter Island residents are related
to Polynesians who dwelled in northern and southern
parts of Easter Island. Hence, it is implausible that they came from only
western islands. This refutes the reading passage’s explanation that moai were built to show adoration to
their ancestors from western islands.
채점기준표
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Grammar
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Contents
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Example
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Coherence
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점수
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3
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3
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2
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3
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Score
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Fair 17-19
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Moai는 전부 capital letter로 쓰도록 하시고, Moai statue로 정의하시는 것이 더 정확합니다. 첫 번째와 두 번째 내용에서 specific information이 다소 생략이 되어있는 것 같아요. 각 문장들의 과정들이 밀접하게 연결되어 있지 않는 느낌이 듭니다.
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