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Some people think that being at work is more
important to your life. However in my opinion, spending time with family is
much more important. There are two reasons why. First today society is very
competitive society, so it is important to be diligent in your company. Second
when you are working, you can earn money. Money is crucial in your life.
To begin being sincere in your company can affect you in today's
competitive society. To survive in this world of endless competition, people
ought to be selfish. In the case of company environment, everyone is aware that
sustaining their places is like a camel passing through the eye of a needle
nowadays. One's ability can be clouded by other abilities so in order to stand
out, a person must do their work properly and faithfully. For example in my
sister's case, she works in cosmetic company, Kolma. She has worked so hard.
Even though our family planned to go abroad, she always told us that she could
not go to other countries because of her hard works. I could not understand at
that time, and I blamed her. However due to her diligence at work, she got a promotion
before other her co-workers. My parents got surprised that she was already the
head of marketing group. She said that she was so proud of herself.
On top of that, the money is important in your life. Working makes
money. In this materialistic society, money is sometimes regarded as one's
power. If you have no money, you will be considered as a loser and be ignored.
There will be no place to stand in this society. We cannot deny the fact that other
pleasures of life can be filled by having enough money to spare. When I was a
child, intangible things like freedom, love and peace tended to be important.
However, in the current world, tangible qualities like money are of greater
importance. The researchers in Du-san company found that two-thirds of
employees felt happy in their payday, not in the other emotional, memorial
situations. The reason was that if they worked harder, they can get money and
buy things that they want to buy. At that time, compensating material things to
themselves caused motivation to their life.
To sum up, being at work with diligence gives you a tremendous result in
the rivalry society. Moreover money is significant and the motivational factor.
In this regard, being at work is much more important than spending time with
family in your life.
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