Today, many families move to another city or country for several reasons. Some people argue that it is not good for families with children to move to a new town or country because the children lose their friends. However, as far as I am concerned, moving to a new city or country is good for the children.
First of all, I believe that moving to a new town can help children with their education. By and large, many families move to a developed city as there is a better environment for children to study. For example, a number of people migrate to the United States U.S. for better condition to find a better environment to learn English. Moreover, people in Korea frequently move to Seoul as there are many institutions and privileged schools there. More specifically, Speaking in general, there are many more excellent teachers and excellent students in a more developed country. By competing with them, children can improve themselves. Although the children might miss their friends, they can enjoy these kinds of educational benefits.
Another reason why moving to a new city is not a bad idea for the children is that they can make new friends in a new place. Generally, many parents worry that their children might have difficulties in getting along with new friends if they move to another town or country. However, it is not true. Children have enough ability to make new friends and during the process, they can learn to get close with strangers. For instance, when I was nine years old, I moved to a new town. At first, I was confused and embarrassed in the crowd of strangers. However, after a few weeks, I could make many new friends.
In a nutshell, it is not harmful for families with children to move to a new place. This is because the children can enjoy educational advantages and they can make new friends in a new city.
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