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Some people think that not it is not required that all students should take history class necessarily in the school. However, in my opinion, all the people especially all students have to be required to take history courses because knowing history makes themselves to develop (What?), and can give people an opportunity to get interested in. (What or Where?)
To begin with, if students learn about history, they can develop (Better mention about skills) be developed gradually many field. This is because they will become naturally to think and compare past with present and they can be critical to today's figure. (What does that mean?) Also, they will want to make change from problems. For example, a study has have shown that the countries that have many concerns about (What?) and have researched about their history have more developed in various aspects such as economy, education than other countries that haven't. (Need evidence) It shows that learning history is very essential to advance.
On top of that, requiring history course all students to take history courses can make them have more interest in history. Compared to the importance of history, there are only a few students to choose history because it is so hard and complex to understand. However, if history class once is required courses, and many students listen it, more students will have an interest in history than before. For example, my friend who took Chinese class for requirement course got to listen chinese because it is required course in my school, became selected the major of Chinese and trade. Although she didn't have interest about Chinese at all before, when she learned about Chinese language and culture listen about chinese, she felt the course is really intriguing excited. This shows shown that required courses can provide students with of opportunities to have interest.
To sum up, requiring history courses in school will give a positive result such as development of different fields, and chance to have interest. In this regard, I personally think that the history courses should be required to all students.
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