▶ Your Answer :
In this established topic, both
the reading passage and the speaker discuss several aspects of Petroglyphs'
purposes. The reading passage claims that it is not difficult to infer some
specific purposes of Petroglyphs. The speaker argues that the assertions made in the reading passage are wrong. This casts
doubts on the reading passage. (같은 말을 반복적으로 적으셨어요)
To begin with, in contrast to the
reading passage, the speaker claims that the purpose of Petroglyphs as
communication is doubtful. Specifically explaining To be specific, recently studying realized a recent study revealed that petroglyphs' same
images present different meanings. This
refutes the reading passage's claim that petroglyphs functioned
as communication tools.
On top of that, the speaker
argues that its purpose as a religious tool does not make sense. In detail, other creations
used to religious object for religious
purposes are elaborate and detail, like cave painting. However, most of
Petroglyphs are more stricter and
have simple shape. This opposes the reading passage's explanation that the
petroglyphs were made for religious ceremonies to call upon divine powers.
Finally, the speaker discusses
that its purposes as a tool for killing
time are wrong. This The reason is that,
the petroglyphs have a practical side. For
example, back then, young boys improved their
hunting skills by playing war games using the
petroglyphs. This contradicts the reading passage's assertion that the
carvings were created by ordinary people to
escape boredom.
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
Good (24-30) |
Score |
24 |
Overall
Comment: |
중요한 근거들은 다 적으셨지만
서론이 조금 아쉬웠고, 다양한 종류의 문법 오류들이 있었어요. 위 지적사항들을 참고하시길 바랍니다. |
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