■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : The more money they have, the more they should give away charities.
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Some people think that the people who have more money should donate to charities than others. However, I have a different idea. First of all, donating charities is not obligation regardless of their income. Secondly, it is not effective methods for solving this problem.
To begin with, it is not a duty that gives away to charity even they have much of money. Many people make efforts to pursue own's happiness and money is one of the methods to achieve it. Hence, spending money is their proper right. If some people gained money without any efforts, No one would not want to make efforts anymore. For example, the last year in my country, as the increase in the rate of the homeless and unemployed person, the government enforced the top 10% of wealthy people to give away their 30% of incomes to charities. However, after several months ago, rich people who gave away their income to the charities was made fewer efforts to gain money than before. Also, the number of unemployed people rather increased due to the system which helps them with the donation by rich people. Subsequently, average national income was decreased and my country experienced the economic crisis.
On top of that, Giving to charity is not a matter for the wealthy individual; it is a matter for the government to solve. Even if they received the support from the charities, this problem could not resolve without their improvement of own's ability in order to be financially independent. For instance, According to research from the University of Maryland, the group which participated to the career build programs held by the government showed 70% higher succeed in financial independence than another group who relied on the charity. Also, they solved the reoccurred same problem properly too. Hence, since to produce the career program requires institutional efforts. it is better to depend on the government than the rich individual.
To sum up, the donation is not an obligation for the only rich people and aids from the government is better.
In this regard, I agree with the rich people do not have to required donate to the charity.