■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer argues that school’s curriculum of music should be planned with other subjects such as math and language classes. This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that music classes are unnecessary even if these were cutting. (these were cutting이 무슨 말인지 잘 모르겠어요) First of all, the speaker argues that music classes would be helpful to learn other subjects like math and language. The speaker explains that musical education can reinforce thoughts of an abstract symbol to express to others. This casts doubt on the reading which states that instrumental students have to spend time on other more important subjects like mathematics and language rather than to be educated in music classes. In addition, according to the speaker, music classes would save money by employing teachers as volunteers. The speaker maintains that people are expected to donate skills and sell their instruments for low prices. This rebuffs the reading passage’s assertion that these music programs are too costly since they require expensive instruments. The final point made by the lecturer is that music classes would get highly rewarding to students. The speaker says that students who learned music could be more creatively express their feelings and thoughts than unlearned others. This refutes the reading passage’s argument that since most students don't have the talent, it is unrealistic to expect them to get much in return for their efforts.
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