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Some people believe that challenging and trying unexplored things are the things people should do to succeed. However, in my opinion, they may keep people from success since they usually take a lot of time and money and sometimes concentration is more important for success.
To begin with, it takes a significant amount of time and money to challenge things. It is such a waste of time and money if they fail in their challenges. It would be more cost-efficient and time-efficient to invest money and time doing something more familiar and you are well informed about. I would like to give an example of my friend to elucidate my points. My friend, who was a very proficient businessman wanted to open a new store. He always had restaurants and he had plentiful information of running them. In that time, however, he wanted to try a new kind of business and made up his mind to open a clothing store. After 6 months, he sadly had to close the store as he failed in his business. He told me that he had to wasted too much money and time challenging new things and that he regretted not having spent that money on his familiar businesses. This example demonstrates how wasteful it is to try new things.
On top of that, 'choice and focus' (영어로 '선택과 집중'은 조금 어색합니다) is considered to be very important to people's success these days. One of the essential factors for successful people are the professionality of the fields (어색한 표현입니다) they are in. Choosing what they are interested in or talented at and investing enough efforts in them would make them professionals. However, trying new things and challenging often would just make them distracted. For example, there was a survey conducted by Korean Statistics Office with 1000 people as respondents to figure out the consensus view of people whether they think challenges trying new things is crucial for success. An overwhelming 79% of people responded that they do not think so asprofessionality professionalism and concentration on in the fields people are in are considered more important. This survey shows that the majority of people have negative views of the positive relationship between success and new trials.
To sum up, trying new things and challenging can make people waste their time and money and block prevent them from focusing on what they are familiar with. In this regard, I believe that people should be hesitant to challenge new things to succeed.
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