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I believe taking care of pets has lots of benefits for children. This is because children can learn about responsibility and reduce their stress.
To begin with, taking care of pets can enhances children's responsibility. Frankly, this issue is like a double-edged sword. It is also true that taking care of pets require lots of efforts. However, I argue that the advantages of taking care of pets far outweigh the disadvantages concerning the fact that it is good to increase children's responsibility. For example, there was a survey conducted by the Seoul national university in 2016, with parents who had a children with pets as respondents. The purpose of the poll was to inverstigate that whether taking care of pets really enhances children's responsibility or not. An overwhelming 90 percent of parents responded It really did. This is because they had seen their children had been more responsible after taking care of pets.
On top of that, children can reduce their stress taking care of pets. To be specific, Imagine that a child stay alone in own house during long time. Would it be possible the child reduce own stress, as playing alone? The answer will be "no". A good way to help the child reduce their stress is to make the child take care of pets. The best example of this is my personal story. When I was seven years old, I always stayed alone in my house because my parents went to the work. Even though I had many toys, I could not relieve my stress. Therefore, my parents gave me a puppy. He was so lovely because he had big brown eyes with light brown fur. After then, I always played with the puppy and it made me feel so happy. This example shows that children can reduce their stress taking care of pets.
To sum up taking care of pets help children learn about responsibility and reduce their stress. In this regard, I strongly suggest taking care of pets has lots of benefits for children. |