▶ Your Answer :
Opinions maybe
divided over whether dinosaurs are Endotherms. The reading passage argues that
they are Endotherms for the following three reasons. However, the lecturer
casts doubt on the reading's argument.
First of all, the
reading's assertion is that dinosaurs could have sustained in harsh climate because they are
Endotherms, according to the fossils have been discovered in Polar areas. However, the professor in the lecture claims that the periods when
dinosaur would have lived were warmer than today, and dinosaurs could have lived
in the polar regions. She went on to say that the fossils in Polar Regions cannot
prove the reading's argument because dinosaurs might have migrated to other
regions.
On top of that, although
the reading passage argues that dinosaurs' legs were positioned underneath
their body like the most legs of Endotherms, the lecturer contradicts this
assertion. The speaker argues by suggesting that the position of their legs could not explain
whether dinosaurs are Endotherms. The lecturer added that the fact that
dinosaur's legs were positioned under its body would have only helped support
its weight.
Finally, the reading's
assertion is that most Endotherms have similar bone structures called Harvesian
canals, and the author claims that dinosaurs were Endotherms since they had these canals as well. Therefore, according to the reading's argument,
dinosaurs are Endotherms. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture
points out that they would have stopped growing or grew slowly when the weather was cold. She added that dinosaurs would not have grown constantly even though dinosaurs would have had Harvesian canals.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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