▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that reading and writing
skills are more important than the speaking ability. However, in my opinion, compared with the
past, speaking ability is getting more important in that those who are equipped with speaking ability are in
influent speaking ability can have more chance to succeed nowadays.
To begin with, so many companies want to
see the capability of the applicants via presentation or group discussion while
the applicants were asked to test an entrance exam in the past. Thus, many applicants inclined to prepare
the presentation and group discussion with other applicants through the
speaking study. Recent surveys from the Samsung Electronics
showed that the interviewer decided the speaking ability of applicants as the top priority who will move to the next step in
hiring process. Hiring managers they pointed out that all
applicants should be prepared in speaking because presentation skills and communication skills are one of the most important job skills that is required to survive competitive international market. forward other test for the entrance of Samsung In addition, because of the changing in
communication channel compared to the past, so many audiences are paying
attention to the speaking skills of the entertainer with interest. For example, due to the easy access to the
smartphone, Youtube channel viewers are increasing all over the world. The
audiences are viewing the various channels conveying various topics like food, cooking,
make-up, and so on. I also watch the food and cooking
channel in my break time, especially concentrated on the speaker's proficiency in conveying information and fun to audiences. When I searched the Youtube creators with many
subscribers, I found that the speaking skills of them were superior to their competitors
in the same field or genre.
To sum up, in these days, abilities to
speak is more important key to success in various fields compared with the
past. In this regard, I insisted that speaking
skills is more getting important nowadays. --> 결론에서는 본문에서 제시한 이유가 요약되어야 합니다. --> 이유로 제시한 바가 구체적이고 주제에 대한 본인의 입장을 뒷받침할 수 있어야 하는데 단순히 말하기 능력이 직업을 위해 그리고 성공을 위해 필요하다기보단 "직장에서 ~ 한 스킬이 강조되고 있고 이러한 트렌드에 발맞춰서 말하기 능력이 더 중요해지고 있다" 등 구체적인 이유를 작성해주세요. Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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