▶ Your Answer :
While the author of the reading passage argues that there are three
ways of protecting pine forests from pine beetles, the lecturer opposes the
reading’s assertion with different views. (GOOD)
First of all, the speaker mentions that the claims that the pine forests do not depend on the cold temperatures to freeze the pine beetles to death seems to be
baseless because the global warming effects the temperatures on Earth to rise. To be
more specific, humans’ activities like industrialization have made the planet
hotter than before. Consequently, the number of the bugs also has increased greatly.
This casts doubt on the point of the reading that the pine trees can be
protected from the pine beetles by dropping temperatures in the forests.
Additionally, the professor mentions that the opinion that the it is controversial to believe pine
trees to flush out the pine beetles living inside their barks looks to be
controversial since the lack of water cannot produce enough sap. To explain, in
order to get rid of the insects, the plants need a large amount of the fluid,
requiring plenty of water. However, people exploit water resources under the
ground where they grow to a great extent. This goes against the idea presented
in the article that the pine woods can be safe from the vermin by using
a sticky substance called sap.
Finally, the debater contends that the suggestion that removing old
pine trees where the pine beetles dwell by firing naturally appears to be
flawed due to the fact that a forest ranger controls the combustion to a small
blaze. In more detail, It is impossible for less forest fires to eliminate many
of the old pine woods. Thus, not only does such incineration is unable to provide large
space for young pine trees, but it also is not capable of regenerate the forests as
they were. This contradicts the writer’s argument that the natural fires can
shield the pine forests from the pine insects by clearing out the old trees.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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