▶ Your Answer : In
this lecture the lecturer explains about positive aspects of outsourcing.
However the reading passage directly contradicts this point by arguing negative
aspects of outsourcing. First,
the lecturer explains that if companies company continuously check the malfunction of
their products, their quality would not be decreased. However the quality quaility of their
products might increase due to saving money by reduced cost, so that they can
invest extra money to develop new and better products. This refutes the reading
passage's point that the subcontracted workers would not work hard because of
lack of strict control of measure and degraded loyalty royalty to their company. Furthermore,
the lecturer also argues that the fraud and security break is not augmented by
outsourcing. The statistics showed that security break caused by outsourcing is
marginal. Also if companies pay company pays more discreet attention toward this security and
fraud problem, total security break problem, including the problems caused by
outsourcing, will diminish. This rebuts the reading passage's point of view
that customer's information and technology can leak has been intimiated by outsourcing
companies. Finally,
the lecturer claims that job loss lose by outsourcing is just a part of job
relocation. The workers who lost their jobs by other foreign workers find jobs
which have better salary and environment. Therefore, domestic job is does not just disappear disappeared by outsourcing but relocate workers to be treated better by finding
superior work place in their own field. This contradicts cnradicts the reading passage's
claim that outsourcing threatens threathens the domestic job market by making companies
to hire more cheap cheaper workers in foreign countries.
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