There might be some people who believe that university students should not be required obligated to take at least one classes that teaches the culture of a country other than their own. However, in my opinion, college students should be required to take at least one class of culture of another country (또는 other countries). First, it is helpful for students to get a job. Second, we students can develop good relationships with foreigners.
To begin with, knowing other countries' cultures is advantageous to get a job. This is because nowadays companies prefer students who have enough knowledge about other cultures. In this globalized world, the companies want to expand their profit resources toward the world. Skeptics of my main line of argument may argue that this reason does not sound like a reasonable position at first sight. Nevertheless, to their dismay, there exist an abundance of examples that substantiate my claim. When I was a college student, I led a hectic lifestyle. This was because of intense job competition. Developing foreign language skills was vital. I had to participate in internship programs and had to get certificates for job. (밑줄 친 부분 왜 필요한가요? 이 문단에서 하는 역할이 무엇이죠?) In addition, I had to take a class about western culture because companies usually wanted to hire students who had knowledge about other cultures. On the other hand, students who did not take a class about other cultures always failed to get a job. (이렇게 말하려면 ‘그런 수업을 들었더니 취업에 진짜로 도움이 되더라.’는 내용이 먼저 나와야죠.)
On top of that, we can build good relationships with foreigners if we take a foreign culture class. It is evident that if we know more about the culture of the country, we can better understand the people of the country, and we can behavior behave in a more polite way. This leads us to build good relationships because it is based on that assumption (이건 무엇을 가리키는지?). The representative case that I narrated above is not the only evidence to support my view. In a study conducted recently, a significant majority of survey participants endorsed my point of view that a foreign culture class of other culture makes us students have good relationships with foreigners. One college student said in the survey that she could build a good relationship with her roommate who came from the United States U.S. At first time, she did not understand her roommate's behavior in her room such as holding a party with her friends. However, after she took a class of the culture of America, she got better understanding about her roommates (룸메이트가 한 명이었는지 두 명이었는지? 단복수에 신경 써야합니다.). Since then that time, she does not fight have conflicts (fight라고 하면 주먹다짐을 연상시킵니다) with the roommate anymore.
In conclusion, taking a other foreign culture class has not only the advantage of getting a job, but also the advantage of making good relationships with foreigners. (내용을 제대로 요약하지 못합니다. “~~은 직업과 관계 면에서 좋다.” 무슨 말인지 알아들을 수가 없지요...) For these reasons, I strongly believe that the university students should be required to take at least one class about other cultures.
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