Some people think that the main role of a university professor is to do
research rather than to educate students. However, I strongly argue that the
main role of the professor is to educate students. The concepts of motivation
and stress show this opinion. (인트로 좋습니다. 다만 show 보다 back
up, prove가 더 적절합니다.)
First of all,
the professor who teaches students well can increase students’ motivation. This
is due to the fact that when a professor has a passion
in what they teach, students are more likely to be motivated to improve
themselves. They make more effort into tasks and become responsible for what
they have to learn. Furthermore, this can bring about better outcomes at
schools. For instance, my brother used to be an
introvert and have no interest in his studies. However, after he met the
professor Kim in the Hong Kong University, he started to change. He
began to have more interests in his studies and participated in school
activities more enthusiastically. This is because he saw his professor
having passion in what he teaches in the university as an educator. (문장 구조가 매우 좋습니다. 작은 문법
실수들을 제외하면 매우 흐름이 매끄럽고 표현들이 적절합니다.)
In addition,
if a professor does not have interest in
teaching students and just does his own research, the students will be very stressed
out. Students today live in a competitive world so they always have a lot of
work to do. This is why they are always stressed out. However, if a professor does not teach students well, it will
make them more stressed out because students
will waste their money and time. From my experience, when I was in college, one
of my professors does did (대학교 다닐
시절이니 과거형이 맞습니다) not have any
interest in educating students. Although he was very famous for his many
researches, most of the students didn’t want to take his class. When I took his
class, I also felt stressed out because I couldn’t understand his class well.
This experience can apply to students who meet the a professor who only does his research.
To sum up, it seems to me that the main role of the university professor is to
educate students. The examples of motivation and stress support the argument.