Some people think that people do not feel
happy than the people in the past. However, in my
opinion, people at the present are more satisfied with their lives compared to the past. This is because that
there a lot of enjoyable and various activities that people can access easily and
that there has been an improvement
of the individual’s wealth.
To begin with, there are so
numerous activities which many people can join them without having
difficulty for looking them, such as sports and music, that people are
able to enjoy their life more frequently. These days, the advanced
internet and social media make help people experience
what they would not have been able
to participate in the
past. I will illustrate my story as an example. When I was a middle school
student, I really liked to play basketball with friends. However, I should
had to move to another city because of my father’s
business. Afterwards, I lost my friends who could enjoy playing basketball with
me. At that time, I found out a website which could check out the available
sports clubs nearby my house. On There, I could find found one basketball club
and even now I have been playing with my club members. This example shows that
people can enjoy their life by doing what they want to do since there are lots
of activities they can find.
On top of that, the economic level
of people improved than the past. It leaded to the improvement of their lives in fields their all life fields such as
clothes and foods. For example, there was a poll conducted by the university
newspaper columnist in Seoul University in 2012 with the citizens of Seoul as
respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand the consensus view
about what they think thought about their
life’s quality in comparison to the past. The majority of respondents answered
that they would not imagine nowadays life. (현재 삶을 상상을 할 수 없다는
말인가요?) An overwhelming 82% had responded that it was because of their wealth.
They said that they were not able to consume what they wanted to eat because of
not just the lack of foods, but also money. They could not buy even a cup of coffee due to its expensive price it was really expensive. This survey proves that
people have a positive view that the improvement of the
wealth caused people to feel more satisfied than the past. (과거랑 비교하니 more을 넣어주세요)
In a nutshell, many activities and advancement of wealth make
help people feel happy
and satisfied, which was not possible in the past. In this regard, I firmly believe that
people would not think they are not happy. (마지막 결론이 아쉽습니다. 과거 대비 현재 삶이 더 행복하다는
결론이 더 적절할 것 같아요.)