There has been a provoking issue that whether people will spend less time cooking and preparing food in the future. I definitely agree with that statement. With two reasons, I will support my assertion.
First of all, the world in which we live is in now has a smart system. Computer scientists call that smart system the ‘fourth industry’, which means that every merchandise in our house home appliance have has a auto-system. For example, if I want to boil water in my bowl when while I chop some ingredients, I can make an order to the smart system, and it will boil water itself. Thus, the smart system can make less time for preparing for food.
Second, instant food is very popular for many people. In Korea, there are so many businessmen who don’t do not have enough time for their even for lunch. Because of that reason, they want lighter and delicious food (밥 먹을 시간도 없는 것과 맛있는 음식을 원하는 것은 무슨 상관?), which helps them don’t not to be late to their company at work. and Instant food is the best food choice for them because its cooking time is only in ten minutes it can be cooked in a very short time and it is quite tastes good. Moreover, many scientists in Korea inquire are trying to develop make instant food more healthy because we always want to stay healthy. So, instant food will be popular and people will spend less time for cooking because they don’t do not have to make food themselves theyselves.
All in all, we live in a world of auto-system which makes us live more comfortable. And Also, instant foods are very popular in nowadays which spend takes less than ten minutes for cooking. Because of that reasons, I think that people will spend less time for cooking and preparing foods.
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