▶ Your Answer :
These
days, it is definitely true that many people are familiar with nascent
technologies such as the e-book system. This
movement is led by the internet, and as it is widely spreaded, e-books are
have also quickly spreaded. (spread의 과거형은 spread입니다) However, I do not think that
although printed books are already threatened by those nouveau technologies,
they would not disappear even if time goes.
To
begin with, conventional books do not need electricity. This is crucial because
it means that we can read printed books whenever we want to read. For
example, if we want to use the e-book system, we
definitely should have electricity. Even if we have electric devices such as
mobile phones or laptop computers, we still have to recharge them
frequently or bring additional batteries. Moreover, in some places such as high
mountains or remote islands, we cannot connect into the internet, so we cannot
read e-books. On the other hand, printed books are not dependent on electricity.
On top
of that, printed books are more easy easier
to find information (On
top of that, it is easier to find information using printed books.) Some
people predicate that it is too difficult to find information in printed books.
But there are always appendixes in the last pages, and using appendixes is
quite simple. So if we use them properly, we can easily get information we want
to find. More importantly, we can look at much more pages at one time if we
read printed books. If we choose to read e-books, we cannot look
at many pages at one time because monitors are not that wide enough
to present all those pages. In contrary, if we read printed books and want to
check many pages, we can just put our fingers or things such as clips or
small pieces of paper at pages that we want to keep. And whenever we need to
look at those pages, we can flip to those pages simply. Thus, we can look at
much more pages if we read printed books.
To encapsulate, printed books do not need electricity,
so those are nearly always available. Moreover, printed books are more easy
to find information it’s easier to find information
through printed books because we can look at many pages at one time.
Therefore, I firmly believe that people will continue to use printed books.
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Comment: |
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