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Some people think that homework is not needed for students. They may think homework is not the important factor for students. However, in my opinion, students should be given homework everyday. This is because they can improve their performances and they can obtain good habits by doing home assignments. To begin with, they can develop their academic performances in school by doing homework. Generally, repeating and reviewing the subjects are very helpful ways to improve their academic performances. For example, there was a poll conducted by the Korea educational association. The study’s main purpose was to determine whether homework was helpful to students’ performance. Two groups are monitored for 6 months. One group consisted of students who received homework everyday and another group was made up of students who did not be given any homework. Researchers gave them same directions and the result was very interesting. The former group obtained better scores in their study than the other another. They said that homework helped them to memorize their subjects by repeating the concepts learned. (Need to state positive results more) This showed that homework helps students to improve their academic performances. On top of that, students can gain good habits through their homework. By giving tasks, homework teacher can naturally pushes students to study hard although they did not like studying. Then it permits students to obtain good study habits which are helpful to study. Let me take my experience as an example. When I was in elementary school, I did not like study at all and play for fun after school. So, I could not sit on my desk with study for 30 minutes. One day, my homeroom teacher decided to change my laziness and bad study habit .help me study hard and gain good habits. so that he gave me a lot of home assignments and if I did not make finish it on time, he gave me punishments. Because I did not want to get punishments, I had no choice but I did my homework everyday. Surprisingly, his tasks helped me to get a good study habit that I could sit on my desk for a long time. (Bit awkward) This story proved that homework can help students to reap good study habits. To sum up, I believe that students should be given homework everyday. This is due to the fact that they can improve their academic performances and get good study habits.
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Fair 19-22
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글은 일관성있게 제시되어 있는 반면, 예시가 다소 부족한 편이에요. experiment 예시에서도 실험의 결과를 한 문장만 서술하는 것이 아니라, 인과관계로 풀어서 설명해주셔야 합니다. (예를 들면, doing every day home-work helps students make use of concept learned when taking a test. 와 같이 이어서 설명)
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