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A thought provoking current issue concerns that it is better to go to theatre than to stay at home to watch a movie. Some people claim that watching a movie in home is more adequate to enjoy a movie. However, in my opinion, watching a movie in movie theater is much better than just seeing it in home.
First of all, movie theatre is the right place which is designed thoroughly to enjoy movies. There are wide screens that make movie characters visually large are suitable for casting even small objects in films, adequate lights and seats that make comfort us feel comfortable for enjoying movies, and also realistic sound systems that help us to focus on, and seats that does not hamper us concentrating on films. On the other hands, (Mention environment at home) things and surroundings like those are not in home, and it is realistically impossible and too ineffective to equip those things in a house to just enjoy some movies. This means that movie theatre is the best suitable place to comfortably watch a movie.
On top of that, if we watch a movie in home, we cannot focus on a movie as much as we do at theatre. This is because there are ceaseless advertisements on the television. Cinema channels presents lots of advertisements not only when before the movie starts has not started, but also during the running time. Moreover, if a movie is famous and considered to have many viewers, programme broadcasting authorities will try to put more and more advertisements as the number of people who watch advertisements would increase. Too many advertisements would be definitely annoying and may deter us from focusing on a film. If we watch a movie at theatre, this situation would not be happen to us and we can enjoy a movie freely.
To encapsulate, movie theatre is the best place to enjoy a movie, and there are too many advertisements on television movie channels. For these reasons, I believe that going to theatre to watch a movie is definitely better than watching it in home.
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