Some people might agree that focusing on academic subjects is much better for children’s future before they enter the college. This is because they think liberal arts (liberal arts는 의미가 다릅니다. 사전을 다시 찾아보세요.) subjects are not significant for shaping the personality of their children. In my perspective, Liberal arts courses should be designated as mandatory course for teenagers. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, many highly renowned colleges, such as Harvard University, require applicants to own the show artistic backgrounds. To be specific, the interviewer examines thoroughly among student’s students’ applications in order to understand their life lives, including values, and interests. According to the research from NAAP (약어를 쓰려면 미리 한번 풀어서 써줘야 합니다), it was revealed that the experiment related to whether students who studies studied art subjects in their childhood showed the severe difference in their a higher average salary compared to those who did not. This is because students who own have artistic backgrounds have developed their personality personalities from various academic and artistic knowledge and easily think the current issues in a broad perspective and become Chief Executive Officer in the company (좀 심한 비약은 아닌지?). This research demonstrates how the art and music subjects could be worth to learn when children attend school.
On top of that, sometimes this type of subjects gives a chance for student to realize one’s specific talent. For instance, I have a really close friend from middle school. His name is Junhyuk Seok who now becomes a global singer as representing our country. The opportunity came to him without any noticing. When we had a music class, there is was a group performance such as musical. Until his team’s musical started, no one knows knew that he was a the main singer. However, after ending the musical, he became the superstar in the school. It triggered his dream and he took audition in YG Entertainment (이게 뭔지 설명이 필요합니다. 채점자는 YG가 뭔지 몰라요.... 이를테면 ‘which is one of the biggest music agencies in Korea’). Remarkably, he easily got into that agency (또는 company 등등) entertainment. If music were not a mandatory subject at my school, Junhyuk would not have been given a chance to find his great talent. With this example, I absolutely insist that art and music subjects should be mandatory in school.
In conclusion, there are many advantages regarding these subjects, and proved by famous researches and personal examples. I strongly believe that it is essential for schools to keep teaching art and music subjects for the children’s future.
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